Sunday, May 17, 2009

Till distances do us apart

We’ll meet and share moments together
Moments, that we promised, will last a lifetime
A lifetime may not be enough, you said
To express the love that’s all mine

We’ll sit for hours, staring at each other…
And not say a word
We’ll just lie there, and enjoy the silence
 And let the stars say the story untold

We’ll be together, happy as ever
The madness will always be there
Your touch will always be as special,
And we’ll live life with reasons to cheer

All this and more… we promised to each other
We promised… separation- will happen never
Guess the stars have played their part
And distances have done us apart

We know, all’s not well
Not that we didn’t try… gave it many a chance
We simply, aren’t the way- for what we strived
But that’s all right, till the day we realized
We don’t speak the way we used to…
And neither do the stars

Still, I’d like to believe… all’s not lost.
That touch, that’s no longer with me…
I’ll try to revisit, holding my own hand
That love, which is fading away…
I’ll rekindle, with even more love and warmth
The fire, that once raged; The spark, we thought we had
I’ll reignite
The bleakness that’s abound; The darkness, that’s gripping us…
I’ll bring light

And I’ll do this all,
I’ll do even more…
To make sure
You are always mine

Then again, the stars may never speak up,
And we may never get off to a new start
But I’ll never fail to try harder
Till distances, really do us apart

44 comments:

T-REX said...

The lost spark of love, beautifully captured in an amazing way. The also template is awesome.

Shruti Mukundan said...

VERY NICE.KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!

BLACKMYST3RY said...

LoV3ddd iTT !!

ur like me =) give my all nd never give up. whatever happens, happens to make us stronger and its meant to happen so nothing we can do but make the most of it. =)

Matty said...

this poem reminded me of something..
well i can identify with the story..

that was one of the most beautiful poem i have read recently...

thanks for taking me back into my memories

Adisha S said...

Awwww, thats so very sweet !!! The desire to hold on :) To fight for what you cherish !

Pranay said...

thanx a lot guys for all the appreciation!
thanx T-REX for the comment on the template.. (dint know that even dinosaurs read my blog! :p)

C R D said...

good one dude. Made me sad for a moment.

jaggu said...

hey it was amazingly written... may be becos we all cud connect to it..

I was really impressed with the template also...keep up d gud work dude..

really cool..

Anonymous said...

One can relate to every word written in the poem....wonderfully crafted how circumstances tries to imbalance a situation and how one's self-belief can turn into our side...
Keep d spark ignited n stars will always be on ur side...
Great Work

SIZZLING SWATI said...

Woohhooo... Awesome.. I really envy those people who can indulge in the play of words... and end up by nicely writing a poem... hehehe..lol... nice work...!!! keep writing mate.. :D

cutestangel said...

This is beautifully written .I love the excitement of love then the lost love and then the rekindling of thelove.Good work keep it up.
http://cutestangel.wordpress.com/

Pranay said...

heyy all... thnx a lot for the comments..

Sushant said...

You seem to be a true romantic..Keep up the good work.

Kenneth said...

I saw it as more than the relationship between two people. It meant more than the typical romantic fanfare. Good Job

Pranay said...

thats quite untrue sushant.. ask my girlfrnd!!! :p
thnx a lot anyws! and thnx kenneth...

Vinayak said...

great poem
loved it
very nice

Saadi said...

Came across your blog at random and it's got some really nice errr....it'd be so wrong to call it trash!!!

Nehow..the poem is awesome! The title caught my attention asap!

Great going, man!

Hitesh said...

kya dude!!! philosopher turned poet..... good one

Hitesh said...

kya dude!!! philosopher turned poet..... good one

Pranay said...

thnx vinayak and saadi
@Hit...
Arre mai kala ka samundar hu! Abhi dekha hi kya hai tumne!!! :p :p

Dan* said...

lovely yaar!

Harsh said...

nicely crafted :)

yojitha said...

i can sense the flavour of the desire!!!
i like!!
:)

kudos!!
yojita!

Alishah Amriali said...

very nice keep it up
good post and excellent blog
i have followed your blog also

mine: www.helpnlearn.blogspot.com

Pranay said...

thnx guys for those kind comments..
And thnx Alishah for following me! :p

Sai @ Blogger Templates said...

You write well dude...I would suggest you to download your own blog as PDF, and create an ebook too....

asit dhal said...

nice song....

it shows how old love fades ....but leaves the footprints !!!!

Pranay said...

@sai...
thnz sai... well that suggestion seems kewl... but who'll read that ebook!!! :p

@asit..
thnx a lot dude

Ponnarasi Kothandaraman said...

Well written poem :)

~King~Of~Atlantis~ said...

beautifully written

Alishah said...

very very cooool...
nice blog keep it up

checkout mine: www.helpnlearn.blogspot.com

Also i have followed your blog hope you will do the same....

VIDYA said...

I could totally identify with the poem.It's very honest,and the emotions seem right beneath th surface,waiting to spring onto the unaware reader and bowl him/her over with their intensity! :)
Great work!

Pranay said...

thnx vidya.. alishah... and everybody for those lovely comments...

umangexuberance said...

oye tu thik h na dude?
inna serious?? :O :O

apart from that...beautiful poetry
sach me one of the sweetest ones i have read recently
tc

Pranay said...

@umang
ooo main ekdum bhala changa...
kuch serious and emotive likhne ka man kia... bas!!
thnxx!!

divsi said...

lovely:)

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namita said...

beautiful poem pranay :) :)

Pranay said...

thanks nammo :)